Revisions to Literacy Narrative

I decided to revise my literacy narrative because it felt like a more personal paper to me. Also I have not gotten my ethnography back so I feel it would be best to revise a paper I already have the feedback for. The comments I received for my paper were also very detailed and very easy to understand. I feel like that will make the revision process much easier for me to perform. I can now easily see both the grammar errors, and also the parts of my paper that were difficult to understand.